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Exile

millennial love
 apple worm in fruit salad 

bitter beginning

Copyright © Arlo Parker | Year Posted 2023

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September 20, 2023 at 7:25 AM

Such a deeply meaning and intriguing haiku. I love the way you’ve written “ apple worm in fruit salad” what a profound and creative line that is. Always admire a haiku that conveys so much in such a descriptive and thought provoking manner! Loved reading this

September 20, 2023 at 10:09 AM

Your visit and comments are quite appreciated, Ink. ;o)

September 19, 2023 at 2:26 PM

So visual ! Makes me stop mid bite ! Potent and powerful Arlo ! Susan :)

September 19, 2023 at 2:36 PM

Our story begins so long ago, SL . :-)

September 19, 2023 at 2:21 PM

so few words, such a strong meaning! only a great poet can achieve this!

September 19, 2023 at 2:37 PM

Like you, SA. Thx 4 visit. :-))

September 18, 2023 at 6:30 PM

Hard to move forward after finding a worm in one's salad:) Made me smile, Arlo. Hoping you are well.

September 18, 2023 at 7:11 PM

Thanks, Dan. Doing fine, but checking my fruit for varmints! :-)

September 18, 2023 at 6:06 PM

When the beginning is bitter, it can be difficult to proceed. Well said, Arlo. Hugs, Brandy

September 18, 2023 at 7:12 PM

Adam and Eve did us no favors, BL. :o)

September 18, 2023 at 12:14 PM

This is a brilliant one! A true haiku. You are a legend at these.

September 18, 2023 at 5:53 PM

You can't imagine how you kind words impact. Thanks for reading, S1. :o)

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