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Exile

millennial love apple worm in fruit salad bitter beginning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Ink Empress
Date: 9/20/2023 7:25:00 AM
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Such a deeply meaning and intriguing haiku. I love the way you’ve written “ apple worm in fruit salad” what a profound and creative line that is. Always admire a haiku that conveys so much in such a descriptive and thought provoking manner! Loved reading this
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/20/2023 10:09:00 AM
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Your visit and comments are quite appreciated, Ink. ;o)
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/19/2023 3:20:00 PM
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If you're referring to the fall in Eden you make a valid point. Of the plethora of trees available why that one? How hard to resist? Speculation is pointless. It is what it is. John 3:16 applies
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/19/2023 5:48:00 PM
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Apparently they did what all of us would eventually do. The crown of man is self aggrandizement. 3:16 indeed, TW. Reconciliation offer. Grace abounds. Choose wisely. :-)
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Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/19/2023 2:26:00 PM
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So visual ! Makes me stop mid bite ! Potent and powerful Arlo ! Susan :)
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/19/2023 2:36:00 PM
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Our story begins so long ago, SL . :-)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/19/2023 2:21:00 PM
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so few words, such a strong meaning! only a great poet can achieve this!
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/19/2023 2:37:00 PM
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Like you, SA. Thx 4 visit. :-))
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/18/2023 6:30:00 PM
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Hard to move forward after finding a worm in one's salad:) Made me smile, Arlo. Hoping you are well.
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/18/2023 7:11:00 PM
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Thanks, Dan. Doing fine, but checking my fruit for varmints! :-)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/18/2023 6:06:00 PM
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When the beginning is bitter, it can be difficult to proceed. Well said, Arlo. Hugs, Brandy
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/18/2023 7:12:00 PM
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Adam and Eve did us no favors, BL. :o)
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Silent One
Date: 9/18/2023 12:14:00 PM
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This is a brilliant one! A true haiku. You are a legend at these.
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/18/2023 5:53:00 PM
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You can't imagine how you kind words impact. Thanks for reading, S1. :o)

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