Exertion

Mouse finger sports a long vertical bruise.... Suffering from exertion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Devnath  Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 10:14 AM
It's acute and lovely penned. Loved always, bl
Horne Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:37 AM
LOL, yes, we all spend plenty of time clicking away at those mice, don't we! Had a chuckle at this witty piece
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:19 AM
what have you been doing, sara? got scratched?.. love the way this was implied; superb!... :) hugggs and hello to baby C..
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 7:37 PM
hahaha, I had to think a second what a mouse finger was. the finger of a mouse? And then it dawned on me what you meant.
Caulfield Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 6:10 PM
Simple and to the point.
Sivey Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 2:41 PM
I love this insightful write my friend! Great work!!
Andresen Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 1:11 PM
Well done Sara ! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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