Exertion

Mouse finger sports a long vertical bruise.... Suffering from exertion

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/2/2012 10:14:00 AM

It's acute and lovely penned. Loved always, bl

Jack Horne

Date: 6/27/2012 9:37:00 AM

LOL, yes, we all spend plenty of time clicking away at those mice, don't we! Had a chuckle at this witty piece

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2012 1:19:00 AM

what have you been doing, sara? got scratched?.. love the way this was implied; superb!... :) hugggs and hello to baby C..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2012 7:37:00 PM

hahaha, I had to think a second what a mouse finger was. the finger of a mouse? And then it dawned on me what you meant.

Peggy Caulfield

Date: 6/26/2012 6:10:00 PM

Simple and to the point.

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/26/2012 2:41:00 PM

I love this insightful write my friend! Great work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2012 1:11:00 PM

Well done Sara ! - oxox love Anne-Lise