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Exercising My Demons

With my Angels exorcised-
I Exercise my Devils
Daren't you guess what this implies?
In Evil doth I revel!

Shout and swear; curse and cuss
In the Bowels of Tartarus!
Sweet Lucifer! I do concur-
Heaven- it's just not for us!

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Sandra Adams

October 26, 2013 at 7:24 AM

I think exercising our demons keeps us in line....got to have fun in life sometimes but need to keep site of that fine line...nice write

Just That Archaic Poet

October 26, 2013 at 7:40 AM

Thanks for stopping by and for the review, Sandra; I very much appreciate it. And thanks for the compliment :)

James Marshall Goff

October 25, 2013 at 9:02 PM

Great energy, Chan! Nice!

Just That Archaic Poet

October 26, 2013 at 6:45 AM

Thanks, Jimbo; much appreciated :)

Kelly Deschler

October 25, 2013 at 3:18 PM

Interesting title! We all need to let loose, and have a little fun, once in awhile! Terrific poem, I loved it!...Thank you very much for all of the wonderful comments. I truly appreciate it, BP! :)

Just That Archaic Poet

October 26, 2013 at 6:42 AM

Thanks as always, SP. You know I'm one of your biggest fans <3

Joseph Matose

October 25, 2013 at 6:20 AM

This is very serious pun! Catchy title. You're so creative. You made my day. Friend, JM

Just That Archaic Poet

October 25, 2013 at 7:02 AM

Thanks, JM; you just made my morning! :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 24, 2013 at 10:38 PM

hope you are not serious, but I sure do like your poem. I was hoping you had not done a typo in your poem's title. And as soon as I read the first two lines, I realized you were just playing on words and I really liked that unique element of your poem!

Just That Archaic Poet

October 25, 2013 at 5:29 AM

lol No, of course not, Andrea; it was one of my silly musings. I don't believe in the Devil at all. I was hoping the title might entice more people to read, especially since it did seem like I made a grammatical error lol. Thanks for stopping by and for the review and reply :)

Robin Davis

October 24, 2013 at 9:56 AM

Chan Do I need to perform an exorcism on you. LOL This is very powerful and deep. Dark and intense. Good job Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet

October 24, 2013 at 10:27 AM

Thanks, sweet pea ;) I have this love/hate relationship with religion, and I like to muse about the Devil, even though I don't even believe in him. I love the Lord, and enjoy playing with religion-inspired musings. Thanks for reading, hon <3

Richard Lamoureux

October 24, 2013 at 9:49 AM

I sincerely hope this never becomes your reality. You are formed to walk in heavenly places.

Just That Archaic Poet

October 24, 2013 at 10:29 AM

No, of course not, my friend. I love the Lord; I just enjoy, as I told Robin, to muse over the Devil, despite the fact that I do not even believe he or hell exists. Thanks for stopping by, Richard :)