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Exercising My Demons

With my Angels exorcised- I Exercise my Devils Daren't you guess what this implies? In Evil doth I revel! Shout and swear; curse and cuss In the Bowels of Tartarus! Sweet Lucifer! I do concur- Heaven- it's just not for us!

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Sandra Adams

Date: 10/26/2013 7:24:00 AM

I think exercising our demons keeps us in line....got to have fun in life sometimes but need to keep site of that fine line...nice write

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 7:40:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and for the review, Sandra; I very much appreciate it. And thanks for the compliment :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/25/2013 9:02:00 PM

Great energy, Chan! Nice!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:45:00 AM

Thanks, Jimbo; much appreciated :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/25/2013 3:18:00 PM

Interesting title! We all need to let loose, and have a little fun, once in awhile! Terrific poem, I loved it!...Thank you very much for all of the wonderful comments. I truly appreciate it, BP! :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:42:00 AM

Thanks as always, SP. You know I'm one of your biggest fans <3

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/25/2013 6:20:00 AM

This is very serious pun! Catchy title. You're so creative. You made my day. Friend, JM

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/25/2013 7:02:00 AM

Thanks, JM; you just made my morning! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2013 10:38:00 PM

hope you are not serious, but I sure do like your poem. I was hoping you had not done a typo in your poem's title. And as soon as I read the first two lines, I realized you were just playing on words and I really liked that unique element of your poem!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/25/2013 5:29:00 AM

lol No, of course not, Andrea; it was one of my silly musings. I don't believe in the Devil at all. I was hoping the title might entice more people to read, especially since it did seem like I made a grammatical error lol. Thanks for stopping by and for the review and reply :)

Robin Davis

Date: 10/24/2013 9:56:00 AM

Chan Do I need to perform an exorcism on you. LOL This is very powerful and deep. Dark and intense. Good job Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/24/2013 10:27:00 AM

Thanks, sweet pea ;) I have this love/hate relationship with religion, and I like to muse about the Devil, even though I don't even believe in him. I love the Lord, and enjoy playing with religion-inspired musings. Thanks for reading, hon <3

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/24/2013 9:49:00 AM

I sincerely hope this never becomes your reality. You are formed to walk in heavenly places.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/24/2013 10:29:00 AM

No, of course not, my friend. I love the Lord; I just enjoy, as I told Robin, to muse over the Devil, despite the fact that I do not even believe he or hell exists. Thanks for stopping by, Richard :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2013 6:53:00 AM

- Power in a short poem, well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/23/2013 7:05:00 AM

Thanks as always, Anne Lise! :)