Slowing down
Almost restful

Placed 7th in Brian Strand's
"Light My Fire"  Lanterne Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 7/28/2012 1:12:00 AM
Hi Carol,,,,, cute little poem you got here,,, I see myself there ;} blessing.
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Date: 6/2/2012 8:31:00 AM
This has me smiling. I remember when I ran and how the legs definitely slowed with fatigue. Good imagery in these few words. Take care. Janet
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:58:00 AM
Path remained intact without walking, fantastic exercise, loved always, bl
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:16:00 PM
i need to exercise more! you cut it down to the basic n it works! great piece here carol :)
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Date: 3/5/2012 10:42:00 PM
Carol, nothing feels better than a good walk or work out... great poem..pd
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Date: 3/5/2012 11:21:00 AM
This is truly a wonderful write that you have written my friend! I love how your poem has brought the runner to a walk! This is an excellent example of a Lanterne, congrats on your placement! I thoroughly enjoyed this write that I have read this afternoon Carol! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:11:00 AM
that's a very nice poem,good luck in the contest.God Bless you. Hugs!Erich
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