Exercised

Legs
Running
Slowing down
Almost restful
Walk


Placed 7th in Brian Strand's
"Light My Fire"  Lanterne Contest
2009
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Duncan Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 1:12 AM
Hi Carol,,,,, cute little poem you got here,,, I see myself there ;} blessing.
Vick Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 8:31 AM
This has me smiling. I remember when I ran and how the legs definitely slowed with fatigue. Good imagery in these few words. Take care. Janet
Devnath  Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 6:58 AM
Path remained intact without walking, fantastic exercise, loved always, bl
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March 7, 2012 at 7:16 PM
i need to exercise more! you cut it down to the basic n it works! great piece here carol :)
A   Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 10:42 PM
Carol, nothing feels better than a good walk or work out... great poem..pd
Sivey Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 11:21 AM
This is truly a wonderful write that you have written my friend! I love how your poem has brought the runner to a walk! This is an excellent example of a Lanterne, congrats on your placement! I thoroughly enjoyed this write that I have read this afternoon Carol! Great Work!!
Goller Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:11 AM
that's a very nice poem,good luck in the contest.God Bless you. Hugs!Erich
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