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Exercise of the Mind

HAIKU #12,049-12,052 When I write haiku My mind in spa called Iris And I am in charge My body seem poised Like personal trainer firm As muscles of mine Reward is in thoughts I'll own like a work of art Bidding me to bid I want to be toned By fresh colorful visions With vocab of worth. *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/10/2015 9:35:00 AM
You are a spa called Iris RIGHT
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Date: 2/10/2015 7:31:00 AM
Writing sure does exercise the mind, that is why I do the contests here, to test myself and force myself out of my everyday thoughts. Nice writing, keep it up! :)
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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis
Date: 2/10/2015 8:56:00 AM
Thank you, Casarah. right back to you. Have a lovely day.

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