Exchange of Insanity

last night you made me cry
tonight you made me smile
tomorrow night I'll sigh
knowing our insanity's worth while
      yesterday I made you frown
      today I made you laugh
      tomorrow I won't let you down
      but I will make you take a bath!
nights and days go on and on
getting crazier with time
but when this life is gone
baby, we'll have written one helluva rhyme!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 4:48 AM
Halleluiah of a time even, Christy. Truth arrow aimed straight at the heart. Hit the mark, and made with a cheerful demeanor. Well written and artfully penned. Love and joy to you.
White Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:44 PM
One helluva rhyme... love that :) I hope to once have that rollercoaster with all those ups and downs too!
Onclaud Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 3:04 PM
sometimes, a roller coaster ride makes a relationship exciting, christy... greeat stuff..huggs
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November 23, 2016 at 2:05 PM
I could picture this clearly in my mind being said to spouse or significant other and the smiles that I know for sure that would have followed. This was great Christy
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