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Excess Is Out

pour pure milk in a drum exceeds....... excess's out................ wets outside mixes with own smells keep colors

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/9/2014 1:11:00 PM

I like keeping the colors for me best BL! ;) Nice Senryu duet my friend. Hugs! Love peace and light! xxx D.

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/9/2014 1:15:00 PM

Thanks my beautiful friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2014 3:15:00 PM

In warm weather, cold liquids do leave a frosting on the container, but as you say, the container keeps its own colors, BL. I see a bit of Robert Frost's "Fire and Ice" in this one. Well done! Love, carolyn

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/9/2014 8:16:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl