Exceptions To the Gray

The water’s gray and so’s the sky
And all the buildings passing by
As well as cars and people’s clothes – 
The gray’s contagious, I suppose.

Yet two exceptions pierce the gloom,
Intentionally, you’d assume – 
The yellow of the school bus fleet
And taxi cabs with fares to meet.

Though just for fall, some golden trees
Join forces on these yellow sprees
To brighten up a dismal day
When (mostly) everything is gray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Gray and grim when Fall clouds roll in. Thanks for the welcome splash of color! Kudos! :) gw
Karmakar Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:20 AM
That's the way to come in peace in mind and soul. Nicely written in melodious tune. Best wishes for you. With regards. sk.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:02 AM
The gray is contagious - and so is tan, which is why we have to be careful.
Adams Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:02 PM
I love this, Ilene! Your amazing rhyme all the time. We were just talking about how blah it is when it rains all day. Thanks for this ray of sunshine!.....pat
Borke Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Ive been noticing, lately, and appreciating the newly constructed buildings that are briefly gorgeous — unfinished — before the exterior surface is applied. Exterior insulation panels comes in vibrant colors.
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 4:23 PM
You have brought light into a dull grey day Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Michael Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 3:18 PM
You're poem is like a melody in the wind...Nice write
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