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Exceptions To the Gray

The water’s gray and so’s the sky And all the buildings passing by As well as cars and people’s clothes – The gray’s contagious, I suppose. Yet two exceptions pierce the gloom, Intentionally, you’d assume – The yellow of the school bus fleet And taxi cabs with fares to meet. Though just for fall, some golden trees Join forces on these yellow sprees To brighten up a dismal day When (mostly) everything is gray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/31/2019 5:49:00 PM
Gray and grim when Fall clouds roll in. Thanks for the welcome splash of color! Kudos! :) gw
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Date: 10/31/2019 10:20:00 AM
That's the way to come in peace in mind and soul. Nicely written in melodious tune. Best wishes for you. With regards. sk.
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Date: 10/31/2019 10:02:00 AM
The gray is contagious - and so is tan, which is why we have to be careful.
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Date: 10/30/2019 5:02:00 PM
I love this, Ilene! Your amazing rhyme all the time. We were just talking about how blah it is when it rains all day. Thanks for this ray of sunshine!.....pat
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Date: 10/30/2019 4:26:00 PM
Ive been noticing, lately, and appreciating the newly constructed buildings that are briefly gorgeous — unfinished — before the exterior surface is applied. Exterior insulation panels comes in vibrant colors.
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Date: 10/30/2019 4:23:00 PM
You have brought light into a dull grey day Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/30/2019 3:18:00 PM
You're poem is like a melody in the wind...Nice write
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