Exceeding

EXCEEDING


                                  in all relationships due right exists                                  
                                  with balance there's always nectar                                    
                                   undue bears always false picture
                                     exceeding brings poison too
                                      in life's mirror depicts true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Maverick Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Hello B L, good content here pleasure to have stopped by..'
Devnath  Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Thanks for stopping by on my poem. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Andresen Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 5:13 AM
- Wisdom from your pen !!! - Awesome !!! - I wish you a lovely Sunday dear friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 5:22 AM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your appreciation with a lovely comment. Wish you too a great Sunday. Loved always,bl
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 4:27 AM
That very true BL! I totally agree with you dear friend. Excellent pen here! Truly enjoyed readin you. A 7 for you! I wish you a very Merry Christmas! To you and yours! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Devnath  Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 4:59 AM
I too wish you Happy Merry Chirstmas! Thanks a lot for your 7 with wonderful comment. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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