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The sun seemed to go down a few degrees
Behind the clouds, it cast its beams

The radiating light gave clouds uncoating of white 
Sun tickled their fancy as they laughted with delight

The heat of the day approaches with speed
Soon outside will be uncomfortable to exceed

Life's duty calls to come inside, get busy with work
Do the jobs desinated to the call of wife  

Couplets...Well, sort of ..Just hastily written on the porch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/15/2014 7:54:00 AM
- Heat and lazy summer days ..... enjoy this beautiful time, Sara - Lovely poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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