Exceed
The sun seemed to go down a few degrees
Behind the clouds, it cast its beams
The radiating light gave clouds uncoating of white
Sun tickled their fancy as they laughted with delight
The heat of the day approaches with speed
Soon outside will be uncomfortable to exceed
Life's duty calls to come inside, get busy with work
Do the jobs desinated to the call of wife
Couplets...Well, sort of ..Just hastily written on the porch
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