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In serenity, eyed at the Sun, no flashing. Sunflower in June.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 11/8/2013 1:13:00 PM
Now I wish I was a flower. I'd stare straight at the sun without the squint........ Lovely..... and fascinating. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 7/6/2013 11:22:00 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:20:00 AM
Nicely done!! - Edward
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Date: 6/28/2013 1:28:00 PM
Gorgeous! Release & embrace a new sunrise...embedded in the flowers & sky.
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:09:00 AM
it's the norm not to capitalize or use periods in haiku, why?, ;) because a haiku is not meant to be a complete thought, it is meant to be a frozen moment CUT from the fabric of time, so anything can/could happen before or after the moment, the image and the sensory input should be very clear like a news report [the sunflower/faces the rising sun -- locked tool shed] Light & Love
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Date: 6/28/2013 1:39:00 AM
oh I just love that image. I am a sunflower girl!!
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