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Exaltation

In serenity,
eyed at the Sun, no flashing.
Sunflower in June.

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Skat A

November 8, 2013 at 1:13 PM

Now I wish I was a flower. I'd stare straight at the sun without the squint........ Lovely..... and fascinating. LOVE SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

July 6, 2013 at 11:22 PM

a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

Edward Orozco

July 4, 2013 at 12:20 AM

Nicely done!! - Edward

Poet Tacito

June 28, 2013 at 1:28 PM

Gorgeous! Release & embrace a new sunrise...embedded in the flowers & sky.

Debbie Guzzi

June 28, 2013 at 7:09 AM

it's the norm not to capitalize or use periods in haiku, why?, ;) because a haiku is not meant to be a complete thought, it is meant to be a frozen moment CUT from the fabric of time, so anything can/could happen before or after the moment, the image and the sensory input should be very clear like a news report [the sunflower/faces the rising sun -- locked tool shed] Light & Love