Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

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Exactly

a smudge in an open book is smeared slightly,
                these chapters -
                         slowly fingertips trace, 
                                            like an invitation 
                                       to proceed,
                             
                          with caution, i welcome you 
                              
           in a humble attempt- you navigate along my pages,
                                  so you can know me:

                                                           exactly


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thoughts from the heart
~ just a little scribble ~

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Rob Levasseur December 24, 2020 at 9:15 AM "in a humble attempt" I love that. I like the way you paint alluring pictures without saying much. You are very good at choosing just the right--and just enough--words to paint your meaning. Brandy Nicole December 24, 2020 at 6:53 PM Thank you, Rob. Sometimes, less is so much more. You and your thoughts are appreciated. I enjoy scribbling outside the lines. :) Brandy

Running Wolves January 24, 2020 at 9:49 AM yes as I've said before when one writes one exposes a part of themselves. to understand another one must merely read slowly and take time to explore the words written from others heart.... you are definitely worth knowing as a person and a poetess.... Brandy Nicole January 24, 2020 at 1:10 PM You are right. We do expose ourselves when we place our heart upon the page. Thank you Robert, for all your kind words about me and my poetry. You are appreciated. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael April 3, 2019 at 3:43 PM Poetry my dear...speaking from within...readable from out... Brandy Nicole April 3, 2019 at 10:22 PM Thank you Arturo!! My heart is in every word. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Funom Makama December 18, 2018 at 10:55 AM Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend. Brandy Nicole December 18, 2018 at 1:35 PM Oh my!! I am kind of speechless, with your thoughts, about these thoughts of mine. Thank you Funom Makama. My best to you. ~ Brandy

CayCay Godwin December 12, 2018 at 8:12 PM To be 'known' is an outcome I've lifelong sought so I relate to this. It isn't easy for someone must care enough to read those pages just as you delve into the comprehension of their own book. It may be little, this poem, but its meaning is lifelong mighty, to me anyway. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Brandy Nicole December 12, 2018 at 11:27 PM Hi CayCay, your thoughts are appreciated. Life holds many chapters, and we do caress every moment. In poetry, a heart is felt through words. In These chapters, these pages. Thank you for being here and for being so kind. Hugs, Brandy

Winged Warrior December 12, 2018 at 1:12 PM Your wonderful words are magnetically majestic and mesmerizing...love & light...^WW^ Brandy Nicole December 12, 2018 at 1:31 PM Thank you Winged Warrior. I am just simple poetic me. You and your kind words are always appreciated. Love and Poetry. :) Brandy

Joseph May December 12, 2018 at 9:31 AM Unravelling the chapters of you..Nicely penned Brandy.. Brandy Nicole December 12, 2018 at 1:28 PM Thank you Joseph. Knowing me, is through my words of poetry. My heart is in every word. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina December 12, 2018 at 7:19 AM Like the old hen might say "Eggsactly" a beautiful little scribble... as always, Brandy. Sorry I've been kind of MIA for a while busy with work this time of year...Have a great day dear friend....love & hugs Charlie Brandy Nicole December 12, 2018 at 1:15 PM :) That's cute Charlie. Thank you for your kind words. I am smiling. No need to apologize my friend. I know you have been busy. Such is life. Many blessings to you. Happy Holidays. Hugs, Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden December 11, 2018 at 11:43 PM This is wonderful, Brandy, and I love the imagery and metaphor ... everyone is a unique story untold, but the pages are there to turn, some we read openly, and some are only granted us by love, kindness, or passion. Great stuff, and going to my favs! (I have one "To Read You" that approaches that view). Hope your holidays are joyous, my friend! :-) <3 Brandy Nicole December 12, 2018 at 12:14 PM Dear Greg, your kind words are always appreciated. True, we are all open books- however, some keep chapters closed, until the time is right- for the others to read. Thank you for adding this to your favorites. :) I am just simple poetic me. I will look at your poem soon. Happy Holidays to you as well. :) Brandy

Phillip Garcia December 10, 2018 at 7:33 PM So.....you come here often? ;) An exquisite write, without a doubt. Just the way you lead our eyes down the page in such a pleasant way makes it well worth the read, to say nothing about the evocative content. Tip of the hat to ya Brandy Nicole December 10, 2018 at 9:42 PM Maybe?! :) It is like reading the same page again and again, you never wish for that moment to end. Yet- you turn the page, hoping- just waiting for the next adventure. Thank you Phillip, for tracing these words. Feeling me through them, is knowing my heart. I appreciate your kindness. ~ Brandy

Bobby May December 10, 2018 at 3:45 PM very smooth and delicate way with words Brandy! Brandy Nicole December 10, 2018 at 9:36 PM Thank you Bobby. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud December 10, 2018 at 2:55 PM a wonderful invitation to know you up close with due respect and boundaries... a grand work it is, brandy...huggs Brandy Nicole December 10, 2018 at 9:35 PM Yes, indeed. Within the pages of a book, moments come alive. To know me, is to feel each emotion of the heart. Holding the words gently. Thank you nette. Your kind words are appreciated. Hugs, Brandy

Silent One December 10, 2018 at 12:25 PM Beautiful words... Brandy Nicole December 10, 2018 at 9:24 PM Thank you Silent One. Your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man December 10, 2018 at 6:27 AM Brilliant and tender.. appreciate your prayers... Brandy Nicole December 10, 2018 at 9:24 PM You are welcome for the prayers. Thank you Lyric Man. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf December 10, 2018 at 4:42 AM Another beautiful scribble from your heart to your pen, Brandy. You have such a beautiful heart, we all wish to know it exactly. All my best. John Brandy Nicole December 10, 2018 at 9:23 PM Thank you John. I appreciate your kind words and all your compliments. My heart is around every thought whispered. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy

Caren Krutsinger December 9, 2018 at 6:05 PM You have described the soul of a writer here, Brandy. Brandy Nicole December 9, 2018 at 7:24 PM I appreciate your thoughts Caren. Thank you for being so kind. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Heidi Sands December 9, 2018 at 5:21 PM Very nice Brandy :) Brandy Nicole December 9, 2018 at 7:23 PM Thank you Heidi. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit December 9, 2018 at 5:05 PM I navigate the pages..and read a poetic mind..blessed with a gift of poetry. Gently written, Brandy..for a charming imprint. Brandy Nicole December 9, 2018 at 7:22 PM You and your thoughts are always appreciated. Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. Thank you Vijay for the compliment and for your kind words. This can hold another meaning. I am a little cautious with my heart. ~ Brandy