Evolve

once upon a night, a dark starless sky...way before time....I, without eyes,saw
you,in my mind...To think is knowing...therefor it is...and we became...a light flickered
on....blinding rainbow of color...Once upon a night...
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September 25, 2026 at 12:48 PM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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April 2, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Rebekah Boble, well done. LINDA
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August 15, 2015 at 1:10 AM
REBEKAH, I like this very much SKAT
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October 4, 2010 at 10:36 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Rebekah. Love, Carol
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