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Evolution Morn

one taut line drawn---
       
           old blood versus new blood---

                            evolution morn
~*~

Inspired by "Breaking Dawn"

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Richard Lamoureux

December 15, 2012 at 10:50 AM

In my minds eye I envision a young and old stallion pitted against each other. Who will win? the young and strong or the older more experienced? Today perhaps the older but eventually youth will prevail.

Andrea Dietrich

November 22, 2012 at 9:01 AM

This title Breaking Dawn sounds so familiar to me. One really nice poem it inspired from you. Happy thanksgiving, sweet lady!!

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November 21, 2012 at 8:24 PM

Annalise,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*