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Evolution

feathered dinosaurs
evolution evolving 
the eagle now soars 

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7/26/2018

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Richard Lamoureux

July 28, 2018 at 7:46 AM

Cleverly expressed!

Susan Ashley

July 27, 2018 at 1:58 PM

Ah, to be able to kiss the sky... I do love the soaring spirit of your beautiful haiku, Charlie. Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Charles Messina

July 28, 2018 at 6:19 AM

Thank you my dear friend Susan. I kissed the sky a few times in my life...Sky Diving...great fun! Warmest wishes my beautiful friend... :) Charlie

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2018 at 6:39 PM

very cool way to do eagles!!

Charles Messina

July 27, 2018 at 1:17 PM

That's because I'm cool..lol Thanks you, Andrea!

Caren Krutsinger

July 26, 2018 at 4:20 PM

Perfect 5-7-5. Nicely done.

Charles Messina

July 27, 2018 at 1:18 PM

Thank you so much, Caren. So much appreciate your comments!

Brandy Nicole

July 26, 2018 at 2:01 PM

The Eagle now soars!! Awe, I would hope so. :) I love watching birds spread their wings, as they take flight. I want to caress the sapphire blue, feel the wind on my skin. I really do. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

July 26, 2018 at 3:28 PM

You make it sound sooo wonderful, Brandy!

Lyric Man

July 26, 2018 at 1:09 PM

Thought provoking, Charles!

Charles Messina

July 26, 2018 at 3:29 PM

Yes... indeed, LM

Tom Cunningham

July 26, 2018 at 12:35 PM

It's taken a while, but yes the eagle now soars, wonder who will soar in a million years from now, that's if the earths still here. Tom

Charles Messina

July 26, 2018 at 3:31 PM

LOL- Perhaps robotic, if like you said-earth is still here...Charlie

Sand Blown

July 26, 2018 at 12:28 PM

the poem brings to mind our limited perspective on reality.... evolution...billions of years of development... and we...we believe we are the first earth-life to move beyond the atmosphere... it's enough to make one smile

Charles Messina

July 26, 2018 at 3:35 PM

Your words of wisdom have made me smile, Sand. Interesting, and probably accurate!

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