FIRST PLACE For "I See Love" Poetry ContestSponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
miraculous ruby sunrise at dawn, gossamer twilight mauve sunset - scintillating stars at midnight sky .. moments of divine awe, playful creepers on the fence, vermillion rose-bush in the garden ... dew drops on lotus leaves ... an almost-forgotten poignant song from the past .. reverberates. precious faces treasured and engraved in bosom for time eternal - emerge noiseless when I close my eyelids, my father’s handsome lined face with pouring love ~ waving me back at our last meet ... my mother’s kind eyes, calm and serene ~ praying ardently for everyone she knew and she did not ! sweetest friends from childhood ~ playing hide-and-seek, floating paper boats on a rainy day... angelic children I taught ~ eyes glittered... faces lightened up when I am with them ~ found love incomparable... a magical love spreads its radiant hue, lingers in the innermost corner of my heart, symbolizing the endlessness of feelings, A childhood which was the source of all love ... evokes, in all my senses ... unfathomable emotions...
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