Evil Looms

evil looms
weaving the fabric of deceit
chatter incessantly

John G. Lawless
1/13/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Levasseur Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 11:28 AM
"Weaving the fabric of deceit" great line!
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 12:35 PM
you certainly wove a super poem John clever word play:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Hey Jan, when I read Jenna's poem the picture of an "evil Loom" haunted the muse. thanks for stopping by to read and comment
Logan Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 12:27 PM
I just had to read your senryu, John. I wrote one of the exact same title yesterday. You've written great lines.
Lawless Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 6:20 AM
and i credit you with the inspiration for this one, thanks...
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