Evil Lives and Lies Among Us

He walks with confidence he has protected his family. The successful banker has 
done well for his family and his mind is set in stone that he is right eternally.
He does not care if others make the right journey.
He smiles and is satisfied that he rebuked the poor family away from his church. The 
poor family with the smart mouth child, who eats too much candy and stole some 
quarters. The child whose father rejected him and has no use for his illigetimate son.
The father sends his twenty-five dollars a week to quiet the child support monkey on 
his back. The child cries himself to sleep to know his father has no use for him.
Somewhere a hand reaches to the wayward child, to comfort and love. Somewhere 
there is love, but not at this disharmonious church!
Don't come to this church unless you have your tithes and clean clothes and know the 
rules. 


I have come to call the sinners!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 20, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Doris i love it, the ending gives it a go,,lol, so cool,..p.d.
Milgate Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 10:34 AM
You paint a clear picture here and it is too often true. Good job.
Trevino Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Love it!!, the ending makes it seem like a comic ending lol, cool write =(^.^)=Royal
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Thankxx Doris ...am trying to enter all the contests before I leave on vacation tomorrow till July 4th.. and no laptop.. boo hoo.. but a promise is a promise.. he cannot bring his work cell phones.. trade off... so am trying to get them all in before we leave... good to hear from u.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 3:34 PM
I hurt for the child and his family...I wonder what I could do to change things...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Knop Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Very cool write, Doris! Enjoyed reading it today and thank you for your kind comments...Gert
Freeman Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:00 PM
This is really a cool write Doris. Sounds like a few denominations I know. Been missing your comments, my friend. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 7:58 PM
Wow ..straight up ..Doris .. like the flow and the go of this one.. good message too. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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