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Evidence of Rain

The dense fog drapes all like a soft wool shawl Morn's sun tries to peek through silver gray clouds But those game roosters crow long_their pride show God's creatures sing praise some soft_others loud Rippled clouds (like sands upon a beach lands) Float upon the eastern sky enshrouded Caught up in this dense damp fog_ rain's evidence Kipling Style Work First try at this stlye Sponsor: Roy Jerden Contest: In The Kipling Manner Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/13/2013 3:17:00 PM

love this Kipling-esqe write, Sara - I couldn't think of anything for this contest, but you've done a great job

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/13/2013 1:44:00 PM

I have no idea what to do for that contest sigh..Light & Love

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/13/2013 12:11:00 PM

Beautiful picture you've painted here Sara...I can smell that rain...reads like a winner - Tim

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/13/2013 9:47:00 AM

A magnificent canvas of nature painted with dazzling words of Poetry! Thank you!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/12/2013 7:11:00 PM

Wonderful poem Sara. Wish I was feeling the rain instead of the snow. So sorry you all have had that nasty flu bug. Seems to be all over. Take care. love phyl

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/12/2013 4:05:00 PM

This is a brilliant style work here Sara! You have masterfully done a Kipling Style poem here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and enlightening write this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2013 3:05:00 PM

You "scourges" all into your lovely words, Sara. - ...... even the fog is "light and airy"("soft wool") - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)