Sara Kendrick Poet Verse

Evidence of Rain

The dense fog drapes all like a soft wool shawl
Morn's sun tries to peek through silver gray clouds
But those game roosters crow long_their pride show
God's creatures sing praise some soft_others loud
Rippled clouds (like sands upon a beach lands)
Float upon the eastern sky enshrouded
Caught up in this dense damp fog_ rain's evidence  

Kipling Style Work
First try at this stlye
Sponsor: Roy Jerden
Contest: In The Kipling Manner
Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Jack Horne January 13, 2013 at 3:17 PM love this Kipling-esqe write, Sara - I couldn't think of anything for this contest, but you've done a great job

Debbie Guzzi January 13, 2013 at 1:44 PM I have no idea what to do for that contest sigh..Light & Love

Tim Ryerson January 13, 2013 at 12:11 PM Beautiful picture you've painted here Sara...I can smell that rain...reads like a winner - Tim

Demetrios Trifiatis January 13, 2013 at 9:47 AM A magnificent canvas of nature painted with dazzling words of Poetry! Thank you!

Phyllis Babcock January 12, 2013 at 7:11 PM Wonderful poem Sara. Wish I was feeling the rain instead of the snow. So sorry you all have had that nasty flu bug. Seems to be all over. Take care. love phyl

Russell Sivey January 12, 2013 at 4:05 PM This is a brilliant style work here Sara! You have masterfully done a Kipling Style poem here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and enlightening write this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2013 at 3:05 PM You "scourges" all into your lovely words, Sara. - ...... even the fog is "light and airy"("soft wool") - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)