Everytime I See Him...

Everytime I see him, my heart aches and breaks.
Everytime I see him, my knees and hands shake.
Living with the pain,
I am in vain.
Thinking that I'm hated,
It's not appreciated.

Everytime I see him,my world turns.
Everytime I see him,my stomach churns.
Everytime I see him,the world goes around and around.
Everytime I see him,it's like my heart's falling to the ground.

Just hearing his voice, all rough yet smooth,
Just waiting for that one perfect move.
At the same time, his scent is sweet & bitter.
It makes my body feel as if it's gonna shiver.

Everytime I see him, a flood of memories come into my head.
Everytime I see him, it's like the burning in my heart is being fed.
This pain hurts so much that it's so unbearable.
To me, this situation is not understandable.
Can't he understand that I love him so?
Well, I guess not...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/15/2010 6:36:00 PM
WHAT AN INTERESTING WRITE, IT'S SAD HOW GIRLS CAN POUR THEIR HEART OUT AND THE BOYS WILL EAT IT AND CHEW IT UP AS IF IT'S THERE FOR THE TAKING, IN ACTUALITY IT IS BUT THEY ARE NOT NECESSARILY DESERVING OF IT, REALLY ENJOYED YOUR WRITE
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