Everything Was Going Good

everything was going good between us two, walking in this path guided by love and as a man I vowed to love and protect what I hold dear to my heart because I think about you every night and day. Finding a way to take your breath away, I want you to see what I see through my eyes. All the wonders that you bring, I will always love you as you’re the world inside my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 1, 2013 at 9:01 PM
Josue, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda
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November 7, 2011 at 5:03 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Josue. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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November 7, 2011 at 1:12 AM
Aww. This is beautiful and heartbreaking!
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November 7, 2011 at 7:27 AM
thanks:)
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