Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

Everything That Breathes

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As I watch the daisies pushing up towards the July sun 
I hear a song of joy being sung, for my heart alone 
They own an ethereal beauty and innocence that 
reminds me of a time when I was young like them 
Beautiful are their golden faces, and their stems; 
Those majestic trees that spread their leaves so high 
remind me of a golden era of wheat and plenitude 
strong stocks and verdant greens is all I saw ;
Cascades of sunlight falling like curtains on my willow 
leading me to longing for scent of flowers on my pillow
If I could freeze the vision of my yesterdays enmesh 
I think I'd frame it with my quadrant mind , alas 
everything that lives returns to mother earth 
everything that breathes , deserves rebirth 
and as I watch the daisies pushing up towards the July sun 
I hear a song of joy being sung, for my heart alone.

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Ulamila Tinadrua July 8, 2020 at 8:26 PM I can feel the joy !! Well written my friend.

Brenda Chiri July 7, 2020 at 2:36 PM Amazing girl this was simply that! ;)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 7, 2020 at 11:22 AM You have created a beautiful image, Vie. Daisies are my favorite flower and this is a fave for me! Love and Blessings to you, Rhonda xx

Aditi Mishra July 7, 2020 at 8:22 AM I've frozen the beautiful picture you've painted with your words in my mind and I can feel the breeze on my face swaying with the daisies. Congratulations on your win for such a soothing write. Much love :)

Janice Canerdy July 6, 2020 at 12:32 PM I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice

Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2020 at 11:11 AM Congratulation on your win. I love daisies. Summer and flowers a wonderful time of the year. A pretty flower and a pretty poem. Enjoy your win and day................

Connie Marcum Wong July 5, 2020 at 8:51 AM Wow Vie, I love the joy of summer that exudes from this sweet poem! My favorite lines “ everything that lives returns to mother earth everything that breathes , deserves rebirth “. Congratulations on your wonderful Second Place win! Blessings xxoo

Winged Warrior July 5, 2020 at 3:53 AM Back to Congrats dear poetess...awesome win Pix...^WW^ :o)

John Watt July 5, 2020 at 12:21 AM Back to congratulate for your fine win, Pixie Dust!

Brenda Chiri July 4, 2020 at 4:00 PM Pixie I loved congrats on your top win!;)

Silent One July 4, 2020 at 3:56 PM Such an uplifting song... You have a beautiful spirit my friend...

John Watt July 3, 2020 at 9:23 PM Lovely nature imagery and gracefully flowing lines, Pixie. Hugs ~ John

Eve Roper July 3, 2020 at 3:47 PM Nature so beautiful as it gleams in humans. Very nicely done my friend. Be safe. Hugs Eve

Gordon Mcconnell July 3, 2020 at 2:15 PM A lovely penned piece Pixie, really nice one with good imagery too. Blessings,Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen July 3, 2020 at 8:57 AM - .... everything that breathes ... a pleasure to experience ... a beautiful poem, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy July 3, 2020 at 6:12 AM Pixie Dust, this is SO BEAUTIFUL and moving--nostalgia at its best! Janice

Rico Leffanta July 2, 2020 at 1:50 PM Yet many consider July the month of fireworks which, in all their beauty, can not be captured with digital photography, so seeing is still believing! Enjoy the view! Aloha! Rico

Winged Warrior July 2, 2020 at 10:02 AM Beautifully penned dear friend...everything breathes and is a living thing...your verse breathes life into reality, Pix...best wishes, love & hugs..^WW^ :o)

Vijay Pandit July 2, 2020 at 6:52 AM A beautiful write, Vienna..I hear a song of joy being sung, for my heart alone..poetry at its best.