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Everything Is Nice

If ... trust with what ... mind says Many times.. feel many things broken When.... inteligence plays its own game to give.....win...see many times gifts are gotten Everything is nice but in their own places Soul feels and smiles itsel nothing but crazes

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2012 8:15:00 AM

Yes, sometimes the world feels so crazy, bl. I often feel like the world is getting more and more broken each day!

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/13/2012 11:01:00 AM

I feel so. Many thanks for liking my write, loved always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2012 10:41:00 AM

wonderful words of life bl.. imagery profound and elegant to entice the mind of the reader luv.. let our souls smile daily ..

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/13/2012 11:00:00 AM

Many thanks for giving me reward through your valuable comment, loved always, bl

Fabiyas M V

Date: 2/11/2012 10:44:00 AM

Your poems are exceptional,bl.What does 'itsel' mean in last stanza? Thanks for your nice comments on my poem.With love FAB

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/13/2012 10:57:00 AM

Many thanks to you too for rewarding me by your comment, loved, bl