Bl Devnath Poet Verse

Everything Is Nice

If ... trust with 			
                                              what ... mind says			
                                               Many times.. feel 			
                                              many things broken			
			
                                              When.... inteligence			
                                               plays its own game 			
                                               to give.....win...see 			
                                         many times gifts are gotten			
			
                                                 Everything is nice			               
                                             but in their own places			
                                           Soul feels and smiles itsel			
                                                 nothing but crazes

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Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2012 at 8:15 AM Yes, sometimes the world feels so crazy, bl. I often feel like the world is getting more and more broken each day! Bl Devnath February 13, 2012 at 11:01 AM I feel so. Many thanks for liking my write, loved always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 12, 2012 at 10:41 AM wonderful words of life bl.. imagery profound and elegant to entice the mind of the reader luv.. let our souls smile daily .. Bl Devnath February 13, 2012 at 11:00 AM Many thanks for giving me reward through your valuable comment, loved always, bl

Fabiyas M V February 11, 2012 at 10:44 AM Your poems are exceptional,bl.What does 'itsel' mean in last stanza? Thanks for your nice comments on my poem.With love FAB Bl Devnath February 13, 2012 at 10:57 AM Many thanks to you too for rewarding me by your comment, loved, bl