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Dear Wife. I am writing this to tell you You come home like quirk,sleep like a whore Either you are cheating on me or whatever Even don’t wont sex with me anymore So your sister and I are moving together As I don’t think you love me anymore. ........ Dear Hubby, everything happens for a reason But I don’t know if I ever told you about her That she wasn't born as Carla but Carlson. As I don’t think you love me anymore.
+++++++ June 11, 2014 Form: Free Verse Tenth Place win Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Breaking up by Linda Contest: Breaking up by Linda

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Date: 6/22/2014 1:45:00 PM
Dr. Ram, congrats on your win my friend!!!!! "So your sister and I are moving together As I don’t think you love me anymore." I got a real big kick out of that ...
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Date: 6/21/2014 10:03:00 AM
Hey Dr. Ram, a belated congratulations/apology for not reading your wonderfully written break up poem before I had to go off on a trip. I have read it now and certainly see how it placed on the winner's list. I'm back in town and will return to my specific comments relating to your winning poems for future contest. Again, sorry I couldn't respond sooner. But what a great work you have accomplished.. Hopefully PD knows it's all in fun!
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Date: 6/20/2014 6:06:00 PM
Hi Dr.,, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT
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Date: 6/20/2014 10:18:00 AM
LOL, a twisted breakup. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/20/2014 12:59:00 AM
Well said words n a wonderful write ! Congrats on win !
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Date: 6/19/2014 8:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram...
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Date: 6/19/2014 2:23:00 PM
awe that's so sweet Dr Ram, thank you for that... aweeee :) Linda
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Date: 6/19/2014 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Dr. Ram, on a well-deserved win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.
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Date: 6/19/2014 1:16:00 AM
Hi Dr Ram., , you did not follow the rules, however, I enjoyed your poem, .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/19/2014 7:04:00 AM
I was quite aware of the rules but can't write even in tghe imaginative way, Sweet Linda
Date: 6/13/2014 9:51:00 PM
Brilliant Ram. GL in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:30:00 AM
Cute one..Wonder who won out in that contest of he loves me, he loves me not..Enjoyed reading your contest entry.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:37:00 PM
Witty, Good twist at the end! well played. Hope its all in fun, or else we will be seeing some more interesting poems to come :-). Great write :)
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:24:00 PM
:D funny write DR.. :D
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Date: 6/11/2014 1:41:00 PM
In it's own way - this was funny at the end. I hope it was just a poem and you are not really leaving your wife. All in all the poem is good. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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