Everyone

Everyone discuss the
                                           problems of the world, life, death
                              Everyone has a different answer to the world's problems
                                            Everyone has their view on life
                                               Everyone wants to go to Heaven
                                                      but no one will die
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Lamoureux Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 7:58 AM
God has wired us to want to hold on to this world and the ties that bind us here. We all have something we need to learn while we are here. I think this is all in preparation of our joining him in the next world. I enjoyed your poem.
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Laila, ha,, and wow.... everyone, has a good concept but wrong perception,,, how true! how true... always~PD
Babcock Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 9:26 AM
That is very good reasoning and deduction on what what everyone wants. Yes, I too,want to reach that heavenly abode eventually but in the mean time try and solve everyday problems. Nice thought provoking poem Laila. love phyl
Gasun Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 6:42 AM
Ha... ha... so delightful and fantastic verse, Laila. Yah, I really want to go to heaven, too but I don't want to die yet, though we will all die, lol.. I love this so much, sooo true. Thanks also for dropping by and reading my poem. More blessings and graces to you everyday. luv, leonora
Eastman Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 2:49 PM
So true! Good piece.
Song Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 7:28 AM
How very true and WISE...one is the result of the other and cannot happen without sequence....nice work, Laila! Pssst, and I like how you included EVERYONE in your title bc this is a universal tho't! :) gwendolen
Mjelde Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 9:58 AM
Thank you for reading my poem! oxoxo hugs Laila
Sweetheart Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 5:44 AM
emphatic lines of honest truth Laila..a thought provoking piece.. thankxx for reading my Halloween Night write.. a holiday full of fun but also lots of mystery and legends luv..
Mjelde Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 9:59 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Linda-Marie! oxoxo hugs Laila
Kearley Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:51 PM
So true...so true :o)
Mjelde Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Thank you Dan! oxoxo hugs Laila
Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Great idea that you have penned...Yes, most want to live in heaven on earth and live forever the way God designed us to live..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Mjelde Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Thank you for reading my poem ,Sara appreciate it alot! oxoxo hugs Laila
Onclaud Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 12:53 PM
a deep, reflective write, dear laila...your spirit shines!..:) huggs!
Mjelde Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Thank you for kind words! oxoxo hugs Laila
Harrell Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Only God has the answers, Laila. Good observation. Love ya, Toquyen
Mjelde Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Thank you for stopping by, my dear! oxoxo hugs Laila
Long Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:00 AM
I like the meaning behind your poem.. Thanks for stopping by.. Check out my poem "A moms love" have a great day... cory
Mjelde Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:03 AM
Thank for kind words, I will visit you again! oxoxo hugs Laila
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