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Everydayness Xiv

one-legged pigeon
pecks at crumbs
of crumbs

birdhaiku

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Teddy Kimathi

July 22, 2016 at 12:07 PM

Congrats David, for your placement in the contest, with this fine piece!! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2016 at 3:02 PM

very cool this one is. I like it alot.

David De La Croes

July 21, 2016 at 3:18 AM

Thank you for your comments, Andrea, which I appreciate very much. Go well, David

Tom Arnone

July 17, 2016 at 6:40 PM

Applicable to humans, too. Reminds me of a Kung Fu, Shaolin priest saying. Congrats on your placement. ;-)

David De La Croes

July 21, 2016 at 3:04 AM

Thank you for your applause and comments, Tom, which are much appreciated. And congratulations to you, too! David

Skat A

July 17, 2016 at 4:57 PM

David, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

David De La Croes

July 21, 2016 at 2:56 AM

Thank you, Skat! I appreciate your support and comments. Be well, David

Madhupriya Shanmugam

July 13, 2016 at 4:12 AM

cute thought;)

David De La Croes

July 13, 2016 at 4:22 AM

Thanks for reading, Madhupriya. Injured pigeons have often to rely on the left-overs of other pigeons - which is the smallest of crumbs. Cheers, David

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