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Everydayness Xiv

one-legged pigeon pecks at crumbs of crumbs

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/22/2016 12:07:00 PM

Congrats David, for your placement in the contest, with this fine piece!! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 3:02:00 PM

very cool this one is. I like it alot.

David De La Croes
Date: 7/21/2016 3:18:00 AM

Thank you for your comments, Andrea, which I appreciate very much. Go well, David

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/17/2016 6:40:00 PM

Applicable to humans, too. Reminds me of a Kung Fu, Shaolin priest saying. Congrats on your placement. ;-)

David De La Croes
Date: 7/21/2016 3:04:00 AM

Thank you for your applause and comments, Tom, which are much appreciated. And congratulations to you, too! David

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 4:57:00 PM

David, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

David De La Croes
Date: 7/21/2016 2:56:00 AM

Thank you, Skat! I appreciate your support and comments. Be well, David

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 7/13/2016 4:12:00 AM

cute thought;)

David De La Croes
Date: 7/13/2016 4:22:00 AM

Thanks for reading, Madhupriya. Injured pigeons have often to rely on the left-overs of other pigeons - which is the smallest of crumbs. Cheers, David