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Every Time You Go

if this is the kind of life that am leading, then it aint the one that i needed coz it aint so diffrent from being dead coz i spend so many days all alone in my bed and i ask myself saying why, why i cant fly where you are, i guess i searched the word but i have never found a person like you , just the same as you coz you a r my everything. every time you go, every time you live i feel so empty in in my heart, is it the kind of love that i i have been searching all alone, baby i feel so empty in in my heart.

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Date: 11/23/2010 4:52:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contests offered to members.. good luck with luv and a Happy Thanksgiving...
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:06:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ferdinand. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:15:00 PM
Nice narrative on every time you go, enjoyed it, ferdinand
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