Every Day I Die

Shadows in your eyes
all day long I die anew
my fair torturer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Love your senryu, Archontoula! Congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
A   Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 10:49 AM
a very nice win, xox~ LINDA
Poet Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Very nice Archontoula!Congrats on the win.
A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 11:08 PM
very deep, Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~
Posey Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Great writing... Congratulations....Jake
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on your HM!!
Vaso Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 11:13 PM
Loved this one!!
May Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 10:59 AM
very good senryu Archontoula...best wishes in the contest
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November 2, 2013 at 11:53 PM
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November 2, 2013 at 11:53 PM
thank you
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