Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

Every Cloud Has a Silver Lining

Every cloud has a silver lining
                             in dark there's light no need to fear
                              if patience's kept living righteously 
                               bad days become good luck dear 

                               When Sun sets brings then dark
                             after passing time light comes again 
                               it doesn't mean that light's forever
                             in life there's both happiness and pain 

                                in despair hold conscience strong 
                               think positive will happen very near
                                  go ahead on with true courage 
                               see everything bad has gone clear        


                               For Create an Idiom - Poetry Contest
                               Sponsored by: Jesse Day

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Stephen Tracy Tabamo June 16, 2020 at 7:20 AM Hi Sir! Your poem was nice. It is short yet very meaningful. Is it okay if I use it in my lesson to my students who are learning idioms? Thank you in advance for your affirmative response! Bl Devnath February 19, 2021 at 6:52 AM Sorry for late reply my dear friend. Thanks for your nice coment. Yes, you can use for teaching your student.

Jesse Day August 3, 2016 at 8:28 AM Your ability to write is always on point and I enjoyed the message in this poem. There rules of the contest called for an original idiom otherwise I would have considered yours for placement. The contest was highly competitive which left out about 10 poems which were worthy of placement. Thanks for entering the contest and I will check out some more of your creative work! Bl Devnath August 3, 2016 at 10:21 AM Thanks my friend for leaving beautiful words for me. Hugs, Cloudy poet

Michelle Mac Donald August 2, 2016 at 9:45 AM A positive & uplifting write, CLOUDY! Things to keep in mind, for sure. I can be bold, I can be strong, but at the end of it all, I am only human. I will save this write to remind myself, that I will never give up on hope. Are all idioms (puff puff pant) heart & mind workouts? Thank you for sharing! Best wishes, hugs, Mikki Michelle Mac Donald August 13, 2025 at 6:56 AM Well, I reread this, perhaps seeking fortitude and courage. Thank you : )) Bl Devnath August 2, 2016 at 11:19 AM Thanks my friend for your uplifting comment. Hugs, Cloudy Poet

Harry Horsman July 31, 2016 at 8:43 AM Great poetry, my Friend, good luck in contest.. Bl Devnath July 31, 2016 at 10:34 AM Thanks my friend for your wishes and comment. Hugs, Cloudy Poet

Scott Thirtyseven July 29, 2016 at 8:46 AM Great take on a silver lining. May you do well in the contest. Bl Devnath July 29, 2016 at 10:40 AM Thanks for your uplifting comment my friend, bl

Dineen Williams Gault July 24, 2016 at 8:26 AM This is lovely, such an uplifting poem. Good luck in the contest. Bl Devnath July 24, 2016 at 10:31 AM Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment and for wishes, bl

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2016 at 6:50 PM This is very nice. Maybe I am not getting the directions but I thought we needed to invent our own idiom. Anyway, I saw others doing your way too, B.L. So it's not just you!! Good luck in the contest. Bl Devnath July 22, 2016 at 9:28 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your wishes. The established Idioms are very nice, so one of them i have written with my own conception. If i make myself a new idiom that will be surely unknown for all except me. So, i have written from established one. Loved always, bl

Madhupriya Shanmugam July 21, 2016 at 1:52 PM Beautiful :)goodluck sir Bl Devnath July 22, 2016 at 9:29 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful wishes. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2016 at 8:05 AM - Although the "sky is gray" and the day is "blue", we must never lose hope - a great poem - I wish you every success in the contest, dear friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath July 21, 2016 at 10:17 AM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your inspiring comment and for your lovely wishes. Loved always, bl

Sandra Haight July 21, 2016 at 6:10 AM Your poem is so full of hope, BL. Life has light and darkness, and no matter what, we have to always look for that ray of hope. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra Bl Devnath July 21, 2016 at 10:18 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your inspiring comment and for your lovely wishes. Loved always, bl