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Abandoned, broken and forlorn it stands darkly upon a hill A ghostly form is seen there and screams are heard so shrill She wanders through the Manor a place no one comes anymore but children show their bravery by running up to touch the door She's searching for her lost love the one that left her far behind He ran off to be with another and she slowly lost her mind The years have come and gone but her pain will last forever Her white dress stained a crimson red from the artery she did sever Now are you brave or are you fearful as you creep towards her front door Because if you are just a bit too slow you will be hers for evermore mkt 2016 Happy Halloween

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Date: 8/8/2020 11:38:00 AM
A scary Halloween ghost story. Well written. love phyl
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Michael Thompson
Date: 8/8/2020 1:04:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 5/31/2019 1:42:00 PM
Hello Micheal Thompson, I can understand he pain, he was untrue to her. Would like to be in her place? No i would not. i feel sorry for her. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/1/2017 5:55:00 PM
GReat Halloween ending on this one, Michael. It could be a good ghost story movie!!
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Date: 10/31/2017 8:36:00 AM
Oooh scary! Fabulous Halloween pen! Cheers :) xomo!
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