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This is very good,

aww!

A thought provoking write, that has alot of truth to it. You say it loud!

"Never say die"...At 80 I'm still saying it, but so far as showing all I've gained, those days are over. Great write. Love, daver

aww well written, thanks for your kind comments on my poema tribute to a poetry soup friend, you on that list too, God bless from diane

Beautiful.... everyones writing about god so much and charity or just flat out stoning people with words, this poem really hits home with humanity. Enjoyed and have a great day.

Hold your head high my friend! This poem is a prosperous thought provoking light! You are right and this is all about hanging in there....You have a style about your writing Mr. Goff and I thoroughly appreciate a thinking mind...BTW...Your comment to Carolyn on her Eyes from Mars piece...that got my attention...I guess I am too enveloped in my world w/ my 2 kids getting to school,paying bills..etc. I like this piece a lot! you've a great ending for it. Thanks for the inspiration friend! Jane

People are always in such a damn' hurry these days... slow down and smell a rose is what I say... Well done James! Best wishes, Keith

Reminds me of the saying, everyone's in such a rush to get nowhere. Sad but true, or so it seems. Great write! Love, Shar

so true !even in Malta my little lovely island which used to be so calm,things are changing here,life becoming one long race,well written my friend-you re in the mood to write and im enjoying it,post us more pls-charma

no one stops for a cup of coffee anymore I like the concept of this write

Lexington ave is in NYC..a block over from Park Ave.

Wonderful truth, you have overturn the altar of modern idolatries with this, this more than philosophic proclamation ... this is elixir that could save us. Masterful write, my brother.

wonderfully done brother Jim..love the message in the piece.

This is very interesting. Your observation is very astute. I enjoyed thinking as I read this write. I hope you don't mind, but I have a question about the part "holding out hope against proven odds." When you speak of proven odds, are you refering to the scientific views about us? Just asking? And thinking. Thank you for your comments.

Love the message,,,great write-Love Rhonda Kay

NIcely executed message James, Happy Easter...Raul

The anxiety and perpetual searching of people seeking satisfaction is well captured, James. You have certainly won this "race." Happy Easter, Carolyn