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Everlasting Love

Everlasting love Beauty and passion knew no bounds, There were vibrant colours all around, Youth and humour had unique charm, Nothing seemed to cause any harm, Two hearts exchanged their rhythmic beats, In each corner and every street ! Loneliness today makes me ponder, Wet eyes proving the surrender, Tough challenges in my life, Little joys too much strife, Till fortune brought you close! Minds got tuned well, Telepathy in each cell, Beats to beats echoed, Time to us bowed ! I must confess, Love didn't regress, Despite our parting ! Treasure trove, Everlasting love! Eternal ! Written on October 14th, 2014 For contest 'The i don't know poetry form contest' by Andrea Dietrich Awarded 6th place

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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/3/2014 8:02:00 AM
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Congratulations, dear Dr. Upma, on your well-deserved win with this wonderful romantic piece! Awesome write, my friend. Pandita
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Archana Garg
Date: 10/28/2014 11:29:00 AM
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'Minds got tuned well, Telepathy in each cell, Beats to beats echoed, Time to us bowed !' I loved this part, Dr. Upma. Congratulations dear.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/25/2014 2:07:00 PM
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Stopping back with a congratulatory hug :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/25/2014 1:19:00 PM
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A very lovely poem and a pleasure to read. Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/25/2014 11:15:00 AM
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Congratulations Dr. Sharma on your win with this stunning piece.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/25/2014 10:57:00 AM
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Beautiful write Dr Upma...congrats on your win
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/25/2014 10:12:00 AM
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Congratulations Upma! This indeed a lovely write for everlasting love where "Beauty and passion know no bounds". // paul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/25/2014 10:01:00 AM
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Love indeed is eternal. You expressed pretty nicely. Congrats.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/25/2014 5:57:00 AM
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Interesting write on eternal love, Congrats.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 4:35:00 AM
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wonderful tender write many congrats :-) hugs jan xxx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/25/2014 1:07:00 AM
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i just love the topic of everlasting love here. The last three lines, fantastic!! Kind of a contrast to the winner right above you! Congrats.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/15/2014 4:54:00 AM
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A marvelously tender and affectionate poem of love! Has touched the core of my heart. Lucky the one the poem is written! A seven from me, Dr. Upma!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/14/2014 8:37:00 PM
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Well done Upma...love can be everlasting...hugs tim
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 10/15/2014 3:46:00 AM
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Thnx Tim ! Glad to hv ur kind words n visit!

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