Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

Everlasting Love

Everlasting love



Beauty and passion knew no bounds,
There were vibrant colours all around,
Youth and humour had unique charm,
Nothing seemed to cause any harm,
Two hearts exchanged their rhythmic beats,
In each corner and every street !

Loneliness today makes me ponder,
Wet eyes proving the surrender,
Tough challenges in my life,
Little joys too much strife,
Till fortune brought you close!

Minds got tuned well,
Telepathy in each cell,
Beats to beats echoed,
Time to us bowed !

I must confess,
Love didn't regress,
Despite our parting !

Treasure trove,
Everlasting love!

Eternal !



Written on October 14th, 2014
For contest 'The i don't know poetry form contest' by Andrea Dietrich

Awarded 6th place

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Pandita Sietesantos November 3, 2014 at 8:02 AM Congratulations, dear Dr. Upma, on your well-deserved win with this wonderful romantic piece! Awesome write, my friend. Pandita

Archana Garg October 28, 2014 at 11:29 AM 'Minds got tuned well, Telepathy in each cell, Beats to beats echoed, Time to us bowed !' I loved this part, Dr. Upma. Congratulations dear.

Tim Smith October 25, 2014 at 2:07 PM Stopping back with a congratulatory hug :)

Brenda Meier-Hans October 25, 2014 at 1:19 PM A very lovely poem and a pleasure to read. Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma.

Maurice Yvonne October 25, 2014 at 11:15 AM Congratulations Dr. Sharma on your win with this stunning piece.

Joseph May October 25, 2014 at 10:57 AM Beautiful write Dr Upma...congrats on your win

Paul Callus October 25, 2014 at 10:12 AM Congratulations Upma! This indeed a lovely write for everlasting love where "Beauty and passion know no bounds". // paul

Abdul Malik Mandani October 25, 2014 at 10:01 AM Love indeed is eternal. You expressed pretty nicely. Congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 25, 2014 at 5:57 AM Interesting write on eternal love, Congrats.

Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 4:35 AM wonderful tender write many congrats :-) hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2014 at 1:07 AM i just love the topic of everlasting love here. The last three lines, fantastic!! Kind of a contrast to the winner right above you! Congrats.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 15, 2014 at 4:54 AM A marvelously tender and affectionate poem of love! Has touched the core of my heart. Lucky the one the poem is written! A seven from me, Dr. Upma!

Tim Smith October 14, 2014 at 8:37 PM Well done Upma...love can be everlasting...hugs tim Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 15, 2014 at 3:46 AM Thnx Tim ! Glad to hv ur kind words n visit!