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Everlasting Love

Take me away So far I can't hear the voices again. Where pain is forgotten. Then kiss me till my lips are numb. Fill my ears with your laughter So I can smile forever Even in my deepest slumber. Love me endlessly And I'll love you till my last breath. We'll smile to the skies Live without fears. Rekindle ourselves in our own sanctuary Everything I'd give To make these moments last forever.

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Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 8:36:00 AM

Hi Yuki, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2014 3:37:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Yuki :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/13/2014 1:51:00 PM

Welcome,,,enjoyed this poem. Keep writing and posting your work. I believe you will find much support here.

Yuki Hikari
Date: 5/14/2014 1:32:00 AM

You really think so? Thank so much.

James Hyler

Date: 5/13/2014 10:27:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart

Yuki Hikari
Date: 5/14/2014 1:32:00 AM

Aww thanks. It means a lot. More coming soon!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/12/2014 9:31:00 PM

Beautiful in every way, Yuki, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/12/2014 7:41:00 PM

Beautiful :)

Yuki Hikari
Date: 5/12/2014 7:47:00 PM

Thank you so much!