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On the brink On the periphery. Shattering hope With drunken glee Strange wreckage With intoxicated spree Prepare to fly high To the skyline T I P S Y Affable mental health comes with acceptance that we always tread on the condone of a c l i f f But the most confident in an unexpected landslide. in a sudden avalanche. can turn us into O C E A N No wine to wear no purple to claim. but when she walks. It emerges from her eyes. ticking, ticking T I C K I N G Tangent love never goes away holding hands for years tasting the same air why did we part? hearts we still live in remembering all the cracks we will never die...we will never die love was once and will always S T A Y
Written: February 23, 2023 Premier Choice No 1190 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/23/2023 12:58:00 PM
Highly creative write my friend. Love is everlasting, as you say. Best to you.
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Date: 2/23/2023 11:47:00 AM
A very cool presentation, Lasaad!
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Date: 2/23/2023 10:19:00 AM
Such a beautiful and creative poem!
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