Evergreen

/I\ ~a branch snuggles it tight, messing ivory ringlets while beneath the orchard, grayish cones on iced moonlight rips. Winter now bears her dry skin, as children romp around a frozen trunk with boughs gleaming like crystal tassels. Nippy a fir which quavers through whiffs of glacial air : the assemblage of leaves falling through hardened snowflakes... Quietly, new moon brightens this view Crowning its frothy head on an evening where owls trembling dizzily on its twigs, hoot low eyes wide; until the tangy scent pervades long after evergreen slumbers on. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 12/6/2018-- Revised Shape Contest for Eve Roper
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Gentile Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations Nette, I love your Evergreen xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your win.
Agustin Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations! Ang galing; ang ganda! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.Maligayang Pasko!
Allison Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 6:37 PM
what a lovely season shape poem Nette, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 15, 2018 at 4:07 PM
- Congratulations on your great shape poem, Nette :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Nette. I thank you for entering my contest, "Shapes". You evoked to my mind the times my husband, sons and I would go up on the mountain and enjoyed the sights and clean fresh air with the peace of God.. Your canvas of words flow so well but also beautiful. Hugs Eve ~`*
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December 8, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Yours is awesome imagery intertwined with striking personification, Nette. So many lovely phrases...amongst them: "which quavers through whiffs of glacial air". Love the tree shape, too...skillfully structured. Hugs // paul
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December 7, 2018 at 5:23 AM
That was a wonderful read; had to "fav".
Kendrick Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Ashley Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 2:39 PM
I'm in awe of your breathtaking poetry, Nette. Enchanting imagery and shape! Warmest wishes for you and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Gentile Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Such a beautiful portrait of Evergreen this is Nette! The imagery is clean and crisp . A lovely shape as well. Good Luck xxoo
Gupta Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:21 AM
I felt confused a little ...To keep looking at ...Or to go through ...Kept swinging ...Your owl moved its eyes ...Sidewise. ...Your poetry-tree dances likewise ... The ambience looks lovely ...
Freeman Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 7:57 PM
I've been observing the many wonderful things said about our former president now departed. Many heart-felt memories expressed about him. If only the roses were given while they lived, they would have a sweeter fragrance.
Freeman Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Hi beautiful soul, with the tree shaped of evergreen love. I am fine of God's love divine. Good to see you're still of the creative spirit Nette. Agape Mose
Rose  Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 5:25 PM
What a lovely creative tree Nette. I enjoyed your poem and shape
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Beautiful design in charming words, nette. You painted winter's imagery with brilliant brushstrokes..excellent poem. A win for you.
Green Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Loved this Nette, especially the moon crowning it's frothy head, that was perfect. Best wishes in the contest.
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Beautifuly done Nette, I struggle with these. Good luck. Tom.
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