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Evergreen

/I\ ~a branch snuggles it tight, messing ivory ringlets while beneath the orchard, grayish cones on iced moonlight rips. Winter now bears her dry skin, as children romp around a frozen trunk with boughs gleaming like crystal tassels. Nippy a fir which quavers through whiffs of glacial air : the assemblage of leaves falling through hardened snowflakes... Quietly, new moon brightens this view Crowning its frothy head on an evening where owls trembling dizzily on its twigs, hoot low eyes wide; until the tangy scent pervades long after evergreen slumbers on. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 12/6/2018-- Revised Shape Contest for Eve Roper

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Date: 12/17/2018 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, I love your Evergreen xxoo
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Date: 12/16/2018 1:02:00 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/16/2018 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations! Ang galing; ang ganda! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.Maligayang Pasko!
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Date: 12/15/2018 6:37:00 PM
what a lovely season shape poem Nette, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great shape poem, Nette :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/15/2018 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Nette. I thank you for entering my contest, "Shapes". You evoked to my mind the times my husband, sons and I would go up on the mountain and enjoyed the sights and clean fresh air with the peace of God.. Your canvas of words flow so well but also beautiful. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/8/2018 2:53:00 PM
Yours is awesome imagery intertwined with striking personification, Nette. So many lovely phrases...amongst them: "which quavers through whiffs of glacial air". Love the tree shape, too...skillfully structured. Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/7/2018 5:23:00 AM
That was a wonderful read; had to "fav".
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Date: 12/6/2018 3:42:00 PM
Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/6/2018 2:39:00 PM
I'm in awe of your breathtaking poetry, Nette. Enchanting imagery and shape! Warmest wishes for you and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/6/2018 8:32:00 AM
Such a beautiful portrait of Evergreen this is Nette! The imagery is clean and crisp . A lovely shape as well. Good Luck xxoo
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Date: 12/6/2018 6:21:00 AM
I felt confused a little ...To keep looking at ...Or to go through ...Kept swinging ...Your owl moved its eyes ...Sidewise. ...Your poetry-tree dances likewise ... The ambience looks lovely ...
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Date: 12/5/2018 7:57:00 PM
I've been observing the many wonderful things said about our former president now departed. Many heart-felt memories expressed about him. If only the roses were given while they lived, they would have a sweeter fragrance.
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Date: 12/5/2018 7:49:00 PM
Hi beautiful soul, with the tree shaped of evergreen love. I am fine of God's love divine. Good to see you're still of the creative spirit Nette. Agape Mose
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Date: 12/5/2018 5:25:00 PM
What a lovely creative tree Nette. I enjoyed your poem and shape
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Date: 12/5/2018 3:13:00 PM
Beautiful design in charming words, nette. You painted winter's imagery with brilliant brushstrokes..excellent poem. A win for you.
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Date: 12/5/2018 2:38:00 PM
Loved this Nette, especially the moon crowning it's frothy head, that was perfect. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 12/5/2018 2:28:00 PM
Beautifuly done Nette, I struggle with these. Good luck. Tom.
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