Ever Changing

life is ever changing
full of obstacles and rearraning
life is like a roller coaster ride
it's like an ocean of ever changing tides

sometimes you have no time 
to prepare
life's ever changing just beware
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mc Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 7:10 AM
TRUTH WITH FANTASTIC RHYMES- ENJOYED THE QUICK WIT AND RHYTHM! THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS AS WELL!! GREAT JOB!!
Smith Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 10:59 AM
Deneen, That is one constant we can always count on, change. Change is constant. Nicely expressed in this write. Thank you for your comments on my poems. In His grip.....By His grace....Janice
Yamin Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 4:35 PM
Wow! Deneen what a remarkable write! How beautifully you have expressed the ups and downs of life by the semile of roller coaster. The conclusion is breathtaking. I am thankful to you for the compliment you have paid to my poem The Magician. God Bless you. - Mohammad
Buys Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 8:23 AM
In the end we can only sit back and try to enjoy the ride. Wise words. Love Heidie
Foulk Avatar
September 27, 2008 at 9:07 AM
very true life is ever changing, all the more reason to keep our eyes on the Lord. a very good piece of poetry. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments
Winter Avatar
September 27, 2008 at 3:02 AM
Beware is right. Truthful and insightful write. Well done. Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
September 27, 2008 at 12:53 AM
Change..the rythmn of Life D-nyce.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Jordan Avatar
September 26, 2008 at 6:54 PM
Deneen - How are you doing - Boy this poem sure does speak volumes of truth and ends in some sound advice - God Bless
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