Ever

Ever held a wish 
in your hand, ever 
held a dream in 
your arms. Ever 
kissed a star just
before dawn, ever
seen the sunlight
in her eyes. Ever
been in love.

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Debbie Guzzi

May 10, 2010 at 9:50 AM

ahhhhhhh yes as you can read and my last few verse LOL and still can be! Hope you enter a Cowboy or Indian westward movement poem for my contest? Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

May 6, 2010 at 2:42 PM

Haven't seen you around in a while, Daniel. Just checking in to let you know I'm looking forward to your next poem. Love, Carolyn

David Byrne

May 4, 2010 at 8:40 PM

never kissed a star but it's great none the less!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 1, 2010 at 8:17 PM

Daniel ..hope all is well with u .. just stopping by to say "hi" and that I miss your lovely lines of poetry... luv..from the "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick

May 1, 2010 at 3:25 AM

Great comparison....Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

May 1, 2010 at 2:31 AM

Beautiful description of love, Daniel. People can relate to our romantic words. Missed you and hope all is well with your mom. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

April 25, 2010 at 2:37 PM

excellent write sounds interesting to me, enjoyed,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 23, 2010 at 9:15 AM

Well I hope my luv is like this one u describe so beautifully and should be entered in Amy Green's contest for wishes... superb as ever Daniel..luv.. "Sweetheart"