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Eventide Elopement

_Eventide Elopement_ an avalanche night sprinkles on earth in delight majestic sweetness Haiku Line 1--5 syllables Line 2-7 syllables Line 3_5syllables *avalanche can be used as a synonym for blizzard* August 22, 2019

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Susan Jeavons

Date: 8/23/2019 10:38:00 AM

How romantic that during a snow storm, you eloped! Now that is love. Nice Haiku. Blessings, Susan

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/23/2019 11:08:00 AM

Thank you, dear Susan! What an adventure, then driving in it..,to CA? Panagiotaxoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2019 7:32:00 PM

I even imagined the snow that comes up with an avalanche! I did not know it could be a blizzard so that was a great new thing for me to learn. OH, Panagiota, no worries about me regarding my poem. I am an old lady teacher. hahaha. Nothing to even consider. Your poem was so cool!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/23/2019 1:10:00 AM

Avalache can be used as a synonym for blizzard. I am so tired, I think I indicated that. I do plenty of word hunting. You are a youngster. Stop! Instead of carrying on about that night, which is wordy. I get poets here, want shorter Japanese Poems! All know Is the Haiku for now. Halibun reminds me of Halibut. My cat kisses you good night and hugs from me. I have only been writing for 28 weeks. And close to 600 poems,How can I compare to anyone here I cannot.Panagiota

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/22/2019 12:30:00 PM

Love makes you do strange things lol. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2019 1:05:00 PM

Righto, Tom! Both strange and wondrous! My best decisions were made in love. I finally just figured that out. I am slow.-)) wouldn't trade any experience for them. They made me who I am today..exuberant and silly and grateful. Panagiota

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/22/2019 10:46:00 AM

Beautifully written :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2019 11:05:00 AM

Thanks Heidi..I am trying to stop being so wordy. I really did elope in a blizzard. It was Lovely and crazy, I must have been crazy in love to do that. But it was a launching pad into anything but a boring, normal life. I wish I could have written a book. Way too impatient for that. Love, Panagiota