Eventide

warm breeze eventide
fireflies light pink roses
crickets sing a song.
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Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 3:53 AM
Your imagery made me smile and dance a bit.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Thank you Caren
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Beautiful sights and sounds..excellent write, Allen.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Thank you Vijay
Kiser Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 4:47 AM
I "fav'd" this one since roses are my favorite flower and your fireflies, "light" on them was easy to see. Beautifully done.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 6:43 AM
Thank you M.L. glad in conjured an image for you.
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