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Evening's End

Reflection of rays cast on the ocean's surface on an evening's end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/28/2021 6:32:00 AM
lovely ~
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Date: 9/20/2009 3:32:00 PM
what a beautiful haiku .. great imagery :) . marco
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:52:00 PM
Raul, You like to use the rays of the sun and reflections Is this the evening version of YOUR "Sunrise" Haiku...HG
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Date: 11/14/2008 10:30:00 PM
What a wonderful Haiku, Raul
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Date: 11/12/2008 3:39:00 AM
Such a beautiful haiku.
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Date: 11/1/2008 12:26:00 PM
this poem reminds me of a sunset beach in the bahama's. great imagery thank you for sharing
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Date: 11/1/2008 8:05:00 AM
Nice peaceful scene--left me wanting to be there. Good use of imagery. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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