Evening's End

Reflection of rays
cast on the ocean's surface
on an evening's end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 6:32 AM
lovely ~
Crane Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 3:32 PM
what a beautiful haiku .. great imagery :) . marco
Esquire Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 4:52 PM
Raul, You like to use the rays of the sun and reflections Is this the evening version of YOUR "Sunrise" Haiku...HG
Neal Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 10:30 PM
What a wonderful Haiku, Raul
Scott Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 3:39 AM
Such a beautiful haiku.
Cooper Avatar
November 1, 2008 at 12:26 PM
this poem reminds me of a sunset beach in the bahama's. great imagery thank you for sharing
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November 1, 2008 at 8:05 AM
Nice peaceful scene--left me wanting to be there. Good use of imagery. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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