Evening Waltz

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Submitted on February 4, 2024

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Nocturnal melodies flow up through the oaks, birch and pines Hues of joy pour over melancholy of a dark foreboding Music lingers on the heart who knows this is evening’s genius

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2024 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Andrea's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your lines. Sara K

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/4/2024 5:58:00 PM

A stunning poem, Regina. Beautiful imagery, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2024 1:11:00 PM

The last line of this is so stunning to me, Gina. Congrats for your win with this lovely gem.

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2024 11:22:00 AM

Lovely imagery...

Tom Woody

Date: 2/4/2024 5:54:00 AM

Gorgeous photo and sweet short

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/4/2024 5:48:00 AM

soft and beautiful, inspirational, and uplifting. Just an awesome Sijo....well done, Gina. Have a great day, hugs, Sara