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Evening Trolley-Car

The sunrays huddles beneath clouds
Horizon as still night enshrouds.

The busy city starts to sleep
As clouds still continues to weep.

Late-night passerby most gracious
Passengers restlessly anxious.

The evening trolley-car arrives
Passengers bound to their home lives.

Within hearts and life paradise
Fervent souls with their sacrifice.

5/12/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 4:44 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Eve with this beautiful poem.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 4:43 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Eve with this beautiful poem.
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 10:35 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... a lovely poem, Eve :) -hugs
Agustin Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 11:59 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you, and belated Happy Mother's day to you.
Y. Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 9:29 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great evening my friend-Alexis
Alex Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 7:24 PM
"Within hearts and life paradise Fervent souls with His sacrifice" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 11:46 AM
EVE, Your writing is excellent and descriptive. Your winning couplet in my contest deserves earnest acclaim. Congratulations on your win.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 2:09 AM
Splendid poem in couplets. Eve. Hope you feel better.
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