Get Your Premium Membership

Evening Transition

Beautiful shades of red and gold, move across the clear blue sky. The sun descends like a large balloon. while soft white clouds flow by! Twilight calmly shows its face. Darkness will soon replace the light. As daylight slowly fades away, evening transits into night!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/2/2012 10:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beauty! Blessings. Rhonda
Login to Reply
Date: 3/2/2012 9:08:00 PM
RALPH... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Login to Reply
Date: 2/29/2012 2:52:00 PM
Your poem was very soothing to me. Well written. Congrats on your 1st place win, Ralph! Love, Kim
Login to Reply
Date: 2/29/2012 12:53:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here!Congrats on your 1st place win.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2012 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Short Verse" contest Ralph. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/26/2012 7:28:00 PM
You have created a beautiful scene! I love a beautiful sunset! Blessings, Rhonda
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs