Evening Transition

Beautiful shades of red and gold,
move across the clear blue sky.
The sun descends like a large balloon.
while soft white clouds flow by!

Twilight calmly shows its face.
Darkness will soon replace the light.
As daylight slowly fades away,
evening transits into night!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:14 PM
Congrats on your win with this beauty! Blessings. Rhonda
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March 2, 2012 at 9:08 PM
RALPH... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Merryman Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Your poem was very soothing to me. Well written. Congrats on your 1st place win, Ralph! Love, Kim
Poet Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 12:53 AM
Wonderful imagery here!Congrats on your 1st place win.
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Short Verse" contest Ralph. Love, Carol
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 7:28 PM
You have created a beautiful scene! I love a beautiful sunset! Blessings, Rhonda
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