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Evening Song

Calm waves gently crash, Soothing the sun to slumber: Liquid lullabies.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 2/18/2010 10:32:00 AM

Another good one.

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/18/2010 10:28:00 AM

I guess that's why water makes us sleepy.

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/18/2010 10:23:00 AM

Great last line.......................Danielle

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/16/2010 3:19:00 PM

The reader can hear,,those waves lullabying..soft and sweet,Lovely Haiku.Charma

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 7:30:00 AM

Do you live near a beach??? I remember those days... I used to work maintenance for a multi-million dollar condo complex right off of Naples beach, southern Florida... So much inspiration to choose from... Perfect place for someone like me... Why I am seriously considering moving back..... Good write my friend, you brought back many fond memories in this haiku of yours..... New fav.....:JP]

Susan Palli

Date: 2/16/2010 3:52:00 AM

Liquid lullabies! wonderful words

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/16/2010 2:33:00 AM

Have heard this sound, HEAVEN, thanks for taking me back Daniel