Evening Song

Calm waves gently crash,
Soothing the sun to slumber:
Liquid lullabies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Martin Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Another good one.
Goombi Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:28 AM
I guess that's why water makes us sleepy.
Moreno Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Great last line.......................Danielle
Chircop Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:19 PM
The reader can hear,,those waves lullabying..soft and sweet,Lovely Haiku.Charma
Pickett Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 7:30 AM
Do you live near a beach??? I remember those days... I used to work maintenance for a multi-million dollar condo complex right off of Naples beach, southern Florida... So much inspiration to choose from... Perfect place for someone like me... Why I am seriously considering moving back..... Good write my friend, you brought back many fond memories in this haiku of yours..... New fav.....:JP]
Palli Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:52 AM
Liquid lullabies! wonderful words
Cheeseman Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 2:33 AM
Have heard this sound, HEAVEN, thanks for taking me back Daniel
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