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Evening Song

Calm waves gently crash,
Soothing the sun to slumber:
Liquid lullabies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2010 10:32:00 AM
Another good one.
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Date: 2/18/2010 10:28:00 AM
I guess that's why water makes us sleepy.
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Date: 2/18/2010 10:23:00 AM
Great last line.......................Danielle
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Date: 2/16/2010 3:19:00 PM
The reader can hear,,those waves lullabying..soft and sweet,Lovely Haiku.Charma
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Date: 2/16/2010 7:30:00 AM
Do you live near a beach??? I remember those days... I used to work maintenance for a multi-million dollar condo complex right off of Naples beach, southern Florida... So much inspiration to choose from... Perfect place for someone like me... Why I am seriously considering moving back..... Good write my friend, you brought back many fond memories in this haiku of yours..... New fav.....:JP]
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Date: 2/16/2010 3:52:00 AM
Liquid lullabies! wonderful words
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:33:00 AM
Have heard this sound, HEAVEN, thanks for taking me back Daniel
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