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Evening Sky

EVENING SKY The moon and stars lit up the evening sky A comet slowly wandered by I gaze at the constellations everywhere Venus here and a scorpion over there Leo to the left, the Southern Cross to the right All of the stars brighten up the night The clouds are starting to roll in The thunder is making a bit of a din The lightning strikes and the thunder booms The clouds have hidden the stars and the moon I love the sound of thunder and lightning To me it is not at all frightening And now the rain is coming down The storm is raging all around The storm doesn’t last very long The wind above is very strong The clouds are slowly dissipating Now I can continue concentrating On the moon and the stars again They have returned just like an old friend.

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Date: 3/8/2023 5:22:00 AM
great flow of words and the impact of the theme. I love the images. Blessings always!
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Date: 3/7/2023 6:25:00 PM
Hi Sandra, I have just read several of your poems. I like your style! Very inspirational! Ellen
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Sandra Doolan
Date: 6/17/2023 10:48:00 PM
G'day Ellen Thank you muchly. I am adding new poems soon, stay tuned. Love Sandra
Date: 7/17/2022 4:07:00 AM
Lovely write. Enjoyed. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Sandra Doolan
Date: 7/17/2022 2:49:00 PM
G’day Gina I’m so happy you like my poem. Thank you for your positive feedback. Take care and stay safe. Love n hugs Sandra
Date: 7/16/2022 11:43:00 PM
A good poem. Well done.
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Sandra Doolan
Date: 7/16/2022 11:50:00 PM
Hi Jeanette Thank you very much. I was sitting in my back yard when I started writing EVENING SKY and then the storm started and I had to finish the poem sitting in my lounge room. I love a good storm :) I'm stoked you like my poem, thanks for the positive feedback. Take care and stay safe. Regards Sandra Doolan

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