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evening silence

evening silence fog swallows chilled vespers a lifeless child

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/23/2011 5:03:00 AM
Kory, This is just beautiful, so sad, deeply touching. Eiken
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Date: 1/28/2011 12:53:00 AM
boy, how did I miss this one? VEry deep and very nice. WEll, it looks like i have now seen all your poetry you have up for now. I hope you put up some new poems soon. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:35:00 AM
dark...yet, well written
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:30:00 AM
This is a vwery strong entry for this competition, great imagination here. Thanks for noting my win in good morning. Déirdre
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Date: 1/23/2011 6:44:00 AM
This is quite intriguing. And yes, I can see evening vespers, chilled and swallowed, being likened to a lifeless child. Really very, very good. Best wishes. Deb ps. thanks for reading and commenting on some of my poems. I greatly appreciate your taking the time to do this.
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:39:00 AM
The image is terrific Kory. Welcome to the soup. I love this senryu. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:11:00 AM
Enjoyed this one..So descriptive that it brought to mind the fog and mist of the mornings here sometimes..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner for sure..Sara
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:09:00 PM
Remarkable! You have painted such a vivid image of the foggy night and then, comparing it to a lifeless child, I am in awe. Charles will love your entry as much as I do. As for limericks, yes, they are addictive and have become my favorite verse form because I enjoy humor so much. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 2:49:00 AM
Nice pen picture with great images on the silence of the evening, Kory
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