Evening Prayers

Outside with nature
at close of day,
birds add their voices
as I pray.

And while evening prayers
are being said,
even the sunflowers
bow their heads.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yaseen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 2:56 AM
I like this one, worth praise..... It actually happens and is a truth..
Gifford Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 8:55 AM
I still remember the harmony and closeness I felt to nature that day and being One in prayer to God. Thanks, Malik for agreeing with me. Blessings, Darlene
Gifford Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Hi, Jan, I must explain about the remark I made about the 7 you gave me. When I said 7's good. I'll take it. I was thinking the highest rating must be a 10. So I was very satisfied with the 7 you gave me. But later when I looked, I noticed 7 was the highest rating! So I was overjoyed when I learned you gave me the highest rating. Thank you!
Allison Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 8:16 AM
simply stunning! I especially love the image of the sunflower - its a 7 from me! hugs jan xxx
Gifford Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 8:21 AM
7's good, I'll take it! I just posted this, so you are fast! So glad you commented. Blessings, Darlene
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