Robert James Liguori Poet Rhyme

Evening Magic

By Mystic Rose and Robert James Liguori

When the sun goes down on this hillbilly town
I will meet you there where the stars never frown
Down in the valley where the trees breathe easy
you and I will walk the sea slow, then easy-peasy
and as your arm encircles me I will whisper poetry

Roses in full bloom in a magical night of romance
we together as one two tender petals hand in hand
rolling towards the wispy winds like a lovers dance
Then with precision we will write in the sultry sand
the truthful words of our destined, happenchance

When the whispering is through, I'll belong to you
as the paint on a palomino foal is golden new
our love together will glisten true
And then, getting in my rinky-dink truck
we'll ride back to town, while the sun comes up

18-September-2021

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Natasha L Scragg September 20, 2021 at 3:06 PM An Excellent Collab Robert and Mystic Rose! Very lovely imaging the romantic evening. Robert James Liguori October 7, 2021 at 3:50 PM Thanks!

Mystic Rose Rose September 19, 2021 at 11:18 AM Dear Robert, it was a real pleasure sharing ideas and putting them into poetry, we must do this again sometime, Take care, and thank you Robert James Liguori October 7, 2021 at 3:50 PM Thanks!

Quoth Theraven September 18, 2021 at 5:01 PM Robert Liguori/Mystic Rose Rose, So nice this poem's 'Evening Magic' call, raised in best fervor of two lover's voices. Quite a ride you two took us on in this collaboration. A romantic matinee well worth the price of admission. ~reprinted from MRR's poetry page~ -Richard Robert James Liguori October 7, 2021 at 3:51 PM Thanks!

Alexis Y. September 18, 2021 at 3:01 PM WoW! Robert, I just commented on this well-written collaboration on Mystic Rose’s page. I found it to be magical and very romantic. All I can say is, that was some night! I enjoyed the read. Well done to you both. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis Robert James Liguori October 7, 2021 at 3:51 PM Thanks!