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Evening Magic

By Mystic Rose and Robert James Liguori When the sun goes down on this hillbilly town I will meet you there where the stars never frown Down in the valley where the trees breathe easy you and I will walk the sea slow, then easy-peasy and as your arm encircles me I will whisper poetry Roses in full bloom in a magical night of romance we together as one two tender petals hand in hand rolling towards the wispy winds like a lovers dance Then with precision we will write in the sultry sand the truthful words of our destined, happenchance When the whispering is through, I'll belong to you as the paint on a palomino foal is golden new our love together will glisten true And then, getting in my rinky-dink truck we'll ride back to town, while the sun comes up 18-September-2021

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Date: 9/20/2021 3:06:00 PM
An Excellent Collab Robert and Mystic Rose! Very lovely imaging the romantic evening.
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:50:00 PM
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Date: 9/19/2021 11:18:00 AM
Dear Robert, it was a real pleasure sharing ideas and putting them into poetry, we must do this again sometime, Take care, and thank you
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:50:00 PM
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Date: 9/18/2021 5:01:00 PM
Robert Liguori/Mystic Rose Rose, So nice this poem's 'Evening Magic' call, raised in best fervor of two lover's voices. Quite a ride you two took us on in this collaboration. A romantic matinee well worth the price of admission. ~reprinted from MRR's poetry page~ -Richard
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:51:00 PM
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Date: 9/18/2021 3:01:00 PM
WoW! Robert, I just commented on this well-written collaboration on Mystic Rose’s page. I found it to be magical and very romantic. All I can say is, that was some night! I enjoyed the read. Well done to you both. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:51:00 PM
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