Evening Idyll

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Birds fly formation
towards pink spun sugar clouds 
Into tomorrow.

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2021 7:46:00 AM

Finally I managed to get through, Suz!! I can't remember how many times I tried to comment, in vain. It must have been a glitch. I like your imagery, but most of all the parting end line! ~ Warm regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/2/2021 11:51:00 AM

Hey Paul: So lovely to see you managed to beat the glitch. Thanks for taking the time to read and stay in touch. SuZ

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/22/2021 9:00:00 PM

Oo ... I think I might like this one even more than the last one I read from you. "Pink spun sugar clouds" is a wonderful phrase. Flows right off the tongue.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/2/2021 11:52:00 AM

So glad you like that one, Tim: I Australia we called it fairy floss. SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2021 4:28:00 AM

It looks so easy and wonderful to see them flying but I know it must be very hard and tiring for them. Great work you have penned about their flight. I can't tell what kind of birds they are in the photo. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/6/2021 6:10:00 AM

I’m not sure either, Sara: Would venture to sat starlings. It was an image found on Pixabay. Thanks for another lovely comment. SuZ