Evening Descends Senryu

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                     Peaceful, quiescent.
                     Evening descends, heart ascends.
                     Soul touched, moonlight blends.

                        
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                            1/17/2021
                              ~1~
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Hinshaw Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 9:40 AM
A very peaceful and soothing verse, Pangie. Thank you - Bob
Romios Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Like the wind, I can be peaceful or stormy when my heart breaks. Thank you for commenting Pangie
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Ahh!! Romantic as well as peaceful work. Your visit to my page encouraged me. Sara
Romios Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Great I encouraged you, Sara. Appreciate your time and comments. Thank you. Panagiota
Buhagiar Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 2:33 AM
This is a wonderful senryu. Is it for a contest? ~~
Romios Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Good morning Victor... Glad you liked this.. I write for the pure joy of poetry only and thus will not enter contests. I have in tbe past. But closed that door. Rhymed senryus and rhymed haikus, I learned of elsewhere.))) Plus OK to capitalize the first letter of each line in this format. So grateful you liked this. Merci, Pangie
Cunningham Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 1:34 AM
That busy time of day that comes to an end and peace descends on the earth, and we relax, charging our batteries to meet the following days challenges. Tom
Romios Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 4:38 AM
Hi Tom.. Agreed...for me..the best time of the day. Moonswept Pangie))
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