Evening Descends Senryu

========= Peaceful, quiescent. Evening descends, heart ascends. Soul touched, moonlight blends. ========= 1/17/2021 ~1~

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Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/18/2021 9:40:00 AM

A very peaceful and soothing verse, Pangie. Thank you - Bob

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/18/2021 1:38:00 PM

Like the wind, I can be peaceful or stormy when my heart breaks. Thank you for commenting Pangie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2021 7:32:00 AM

Ahh!! Romantic as well as peaceful work. Your visit to my page encouraged me. Sara

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/18/2021 1:36:00 PM

Great I encouraged you, Sara. Appreciate your time and comments. Thank you. Panagiota

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/18/2021 2:33:00 AM

This is a wonderful senryu. Is it for a contest? ~~

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/18/2021 4:45:00 AM

Good morning Victor... Glad you liked this.. I write for the pure joy of poetry only and thus will not enter contests. I have in tbe past. But closed that door. Rhymed senryus and rhymed haikus, I learned of elsewhere.))) Plus OK to capitalize the first letter of each line in this format. So grateful you liked this. Merci, Pangie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/18/2021 1:34:00 AM

That busy time of day that comes to an end and peace descends on the earth, and we relax, charging our batteries to meet the following days challenges. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/18/2021 4:38:00 AM

Hi Tom.. Agreed...for me..the best time of the day. Moonswept Pangie))